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Essays vs. those boring things you write in English Class

by janra
Posted to Diaries, Diary on Thu Sep 09, 2004 at 07:35:05 AM PST
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Found a super-interesting link yesterday about essay-writing. The author rambles a bit, but raises some excellent points.

The Age of the Essay describes what an essay actually is - and it's not the introduction-three-paragraphs-conclusion thing that everybody hates to write.

Actually, because I thought it was so good, I linked to it in the "writer's guidelines" for this site. :-)


In the essay about essays, Paul Graham points out many diverse points and pulls them all together in the end. That "essai" means "try", and that essays should start with a question, not a thesis, and "try" to answer that question. That argument, defence, and essays are not the same thing at all, and that rhetoric, which is intended to persuade, is useful but essays aren't really intended to persuade. The historical reasons why English class essays are virtually always about literature.

The point that stuck with me from his essay is that "one learns nothing from what one expects." If you take an essay as a "try" and do some exploring on a subject, you may learn something. And if you learn something, chances are your readers will too. Sometimes it won't necessarily be a fact that you learn, but several facts that you already knew made a surprising connection. For example, I knew that "essay" was from "essai" which means "try", but I didn't know how that connected to the essays we all had to write in high school. Now I do - we weren't writing real essays in high school. We were writing short dissertations - defences of a thesis statement.

An essay as Graham describes it is, I think, the kind of thing I would love to see more of on this site. Pick a subject and explore it, make links you hadn't thought of before, find a couple of facts you weren't aware of - then present that to everybody else. It sounds to me like much more fun to write - and read. It also reduces the need for the writer to be an authority. In a field where the "authorities" all say contradictory things, I think an exploration is more valuable than a flat statement of personal preference disguised as a rule.

Although as I mentioned, I find Graham's essays rather rambling - he could probably stand some editing once the first "try" is written to make it more concise (and more appealing for busy surfers to read). The order thoughts present themselves to the writer may show a bit about how the writer thinks, but aren't always in the order best suited for reading.

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by arielladrake on Mon Oct 18, 2004 at 02:00:41 PM PST
Oooh, that's very interesting indeed, and links into a discussion we had in one of my classes last semester. Everyone was a little bit daunted because we were set an assessment that was to be a 'Rumination'.

Reading that, I realise that what we were actually being asked to write was a 'real essay'.

Thankyou muchly for the link. :)

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