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Keeping it in Perspective

by Brad Johnson
Posted to Craft, Language on Tue Jul 20, 2004 at 07:31:25 AM PST
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Perspective is more than just a question of writing style. It is a question of power. Should you be the omniscient god, knowing every thought that runs through your characters' heads? Or should you confine the narrator's knowledge to what only she knows, thus focusing on a more intimate subset of the story? The answer may vary by writer, or it may vary by story. Either way, it is a decision that must be made even before you can begin to plot your story.


For the sake of thorough analysis, let's take a cursory look at the three different types of perspective.

My Three Best Friends

First-person perspective is the way that we normally talk, the way that we tell a story in which we are closely involved. It uses the first-person pronouns "Me," "Myself," and "I" extensively.

Processing the events playing out before me, I raised my pistol to eye level and threatened the intruder.

This is a dominant form of writing, giving authority to every event since the speaker is an eye-witness to what happens. There are drawbacks, however, as the author must establish a level of integrity for the narrator or risk the reader not believing the characters.

To You and Yours

Second-person perspective is normally reserved for a list of instructions, though it can have its place in other forms of writing. Most of the time, a sentence written in second-person perspective has no subject, leaving it to be understood as "You."

Embrace your love with both hands and your tentative kiss will become a passionate moment.

In this form of writing, the reader is more directly involved, as the sentence reaches out and draws you in to what's going on. If you're writing a technical manual or a guide to rebuilding a Volkswagen engine, you'll want to adhere closely to this style. However, if you're writing a formal essay or a work of fiction, you might want to use this perspective sparingly.

His and Hers Matching Towels

The final variety of perspective, of course, is third-person. In this form the writer is something of an all-knowing, all-seeing entity, and he's connected to the thoughts and actions of each character. This is also the most prevalent of perspective forms.

Christine gripped the reins, gritted her teeth, and closed her eyes, hoping that her thoroughbred would make the jump over the gate.

The main advantage to this perspective is that no action is questioned. It is as if God Himself were telling the story, and the decisions made by each character are without reproach. However, this lacks the intimacy held by first-person perspective, and the story quickly becomes bigger than the plot itself.

Choosing Your Vantage Point

When you sit down to write a story, you have to ask yourself a few questions in order to determine the best perspective from which to work. Is your story focused on a single person, detailing her growth as she overcomes adversity? If so, then first-person perspective is probably the best choice. Does your story chronicle the events of a killer epidemic that sweeps the entire planet? In that case, third-person perspective would be the obvious position to take.

That's not to say that you couldn't experiment with a different perspective. If you were trying to tell the first story from the third-person, it would be a challenge to properly relate your reader to the lead character. Likewise, in the case of the epidemic, if you followed only one character, you would have trouble convincing the casual reader of the global impact of the virus.

One of the best examples of an interesting take on perspective is Bram Stoker's Dracula. In that novel, Stoker uses first-person perspective from a variety of different sources through their journal entries. We are connected to each individual, but at the same time are given many different portals into the story.

Why is it important to determine the perspective before writing the plot outline? It's simply because you need to know from the beginning how your story will progress. Depending on your choice, you will be faced with interesting possibilities of working through certain situations and other possibilities will be eliminated.

For example, if we are writing from first-person perspective, then we don't automatically know the motives driving the stranger that comes to our protagonist's aid. Instead, we have to plot around that, either by simply having the stranger state his motives, which is not very interesting, or having our narrator catch glimpses of the stranger's actions that reveal his characteristics. Knowing in advance that this stranger does not have a voice exposes the need for justification through his actions.

Mixing and Matching

There is no rule that says a story may only be written in a single form of perspective. In fact, it would be a very boring world if this were so. Dialogue, of course, takes place in first-person, even if the rest of the story were in third-person. Interjections of second-person perspective can be used as a device to make the reader a part of the story. Take a look at the following paragraph and notice its use of perspective.

You can never tell how your day will go from the way that you wake up. Your back might creak when you rise, or you may feel clear and refreshed; still, you have no idea of inevitable events. When Dirk aimed his harpoon gun, the tenor of the day changed. It was neither a shark nor a whale that was in his sights, but the target was in no less danger. I had no idea what impalement would feel like, and I wasn't ready to find out. All that I could think of was how I wanted to crawl under the covers again and sleep the day away.

Here we see three different uses of perspective. The first two sentences are written in standard second-person. They are rhetorical in nature, but serve to captivate the reader. The second two sentences are standard third-person perspective, detailing and describing the actions of a troubling antagonist. However, we aren't given a clue as to Dirk's motive; that remains a mystery. The final two sentences, in first-person perspective, reveal the real threat to our protagonist and give us a vision into her mind. Though faced with impending danger, she does not fret but casually wonders how her earlier decision (to get out of bed) could have changed the course of her day. What kind of person could be so calm in a perilous situation?

Follow-through

We have learned that there are significant advantages and disadvantages to each style of perspective. Any budding writer (and even those who are well-experienced) should look through some of their past work and see if they used the best-suited style. Would your story have been better told from merely the narrator's point of view? Could you have given us better insight into the plot from the view of an outsider? Might the story have been more enticing if you had spoken directly to the reader on occasion?

It is important to remember that a picture of a diamond from a single angle shows only a few facets; in order to fully appreciate its beauty you must hold it in your hand. Second to that option, a picture from every angle will reveal the diamond's intracacies. Nothing, however, can outshine that breathtaking shot from the proper angle with the perfect backlighting.

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    The poll is lacking (5.00/1) (#8)
    by jasoneaton on Fri Oct 29, 2004 at 12:04:42 PM PST
    Asking a writer what his favorite perspecitive, is somewhat analagous to asking a painter their favorite color, or a carpenter his favorite nail size.

    I personally find first-person to be easiest, but will use whatever the piece calls for.
    --
    "I have sworn upon the altar of God, eternal hostility against every form of tyranny over the mind of man." --Thomas Jefferson

    Perspective from my point of view (3.00/0) (#5)
    by janra on Sun Jul 18, 2004 at 09:15:41 PM PST
    First, I have to say you haven't really made it clear to me what the distinction is between perspective and point of view. The three main perspectives you've described here match pretty well with the usual general descriptions of POV - you even used the term 'point of view' in your second-last paragraph. You hinted that you think there's a difference in an editorial comment, but unless you meant that 'perspective' was a broad grouping of related POVs, I don't see the distinction.

    I do have a few other quibbles with how you describe some of the different perspectives.

    In your description of the first person, you call it "a dominant form of writing" and say, as many do, that it is a more personal perspective and one that leads to a greater connection with the reader. This has not been my experience. What I've seen is that it is used mostly by beginning authors who think that it gives them a connection with the reader that is simply not supported by the level of characterization in their story. In quite a few cases, it gives them such a false sense of connection with the reader that they put less effort into actually making that connection than they otherwise would have. It can be very powerful when well used, but is a lot harder to do well than it looks. It is not intrinsically more "personal".

    In your description of third person, you mention that it "lacks intimacy [...] and the story quickly becomes bigger than the plot itself" which again, has not been my experience. Third person can be extremely intimate - it depends on the distance chosen, as well as the writer's style and skill. Third person omniscient is certainly a very distant type, and can lack intimacy, but there are many much closer types of third.

    There is a very good reason that third person is the most prevalent of all the point of view classes, and none of them are due to what you describe as the characteristics of third person. Only in third person omniscient (very rarely used these days) is the narrator "an all-knowing, all-seeing entity"; "no action is questioned" applies (or doesn't) in equal measure to all three of the types of POV; and I'm not quite sure where you got the impression that "the decisions made by each character are without reproach" - in first person, the decisions made by the narrator are just as much "without reproach" as those made by the POV character in third. That is, unless you are in omniscient or limited-omni (again, very rare these days) in which the narrator is an observer not taking part in the story but expressing his opinions of the action.

    As for how the different points of view should be used, well, I have a few disagreements there as well, mainly related to my quibbles above :-)

    You write: "in the case of the epidemic, if you followed only one character, you would have trouble convincing the casual reader of the global impact of the virus."

    I would like to offer a counter-example: if you show a planet blowing up, people don't feel for the global disaster, they think "wow, that was a big boom" - it doesn't draw them into the story. If you put them in a sinking car with the main character trying to get the doors open against water pressure and a shrinking airspace, they're there... unless you completely blow it and make that very tense situation boring.

    In your global epidemic, you can show the huge impact through only one character's experiences - and it would probably have more of an impact on the reader. It's hard to care about a crowd except in an abstract way. We are basically "hard-wired" to care about individuals, not crowds; communities, not nations.

    In your helpful stranger example:

    "For example, if we are writing from first-person perspective, then we don't automatically know the motives driving the stranger that comes to our protagonist's aid. Instead, we have to plot around that, either by simply having the stranger state his motives, which is not very interesting, or having our narrator catch glimpses of the stranger's actions that reveal his characteristics. Knowing in advance that this stranger does not have a voice exposes the need for justification through his actions."

    you neglect to mention that regardless of the POV chosen, you will have to explain the stranger's motives through his actions if you want your story to stay interesting. As you mentioned, having the stranger simply state his motives is not interesting. In a POV that allows us access to the stranger's thoughts, having the narrator state his motives is similarly uninteresting. In both cases, his motives should be shown through his actions to the extent that they're important to the plot. (This is the "show, don't tell" guideline that is good advice in general, but with which I take issue when it's used as an absolute rule.)

    And finally, your mix & match example is rather uneven. While, as you say, dialogue uses first person pronouns even in a story told in third person, a passage must have a clear point of view character or there is a real risk of confusing the reader. In tight third or first, the second person sentences of your example could well be the POV character musing to herself, but the combination of third and first person left a bit too much ambiguity - deadly to the pace in a scene of mortal peril. Who is Dirk pointing the harpoon at? Is it the "I" character as hinted at in the final sentences ("I had no idea what impalement would feel like, and I wasn't ready to find out.") or not? If so, his target should be called "I", not "the target". If not, the comment about finding out what impalement felt like is completely out of place.
    --
    Who needs to be big and burly when you can just apply physics?

    The Subject Of His Comment (3.00/0) (#7)
    by CheeseburgerBrown on Tue Jul 27, 2004 at 11:43:42 AM PST
    I'm currently (and for the past decade) an addict of first person narrating with the occasional second person interlude. Even when I'm trying to write third person narration, I find that the narrator ends up personified in a sentence or two that can only have come from the God of that particular universe.

    I have no control. I need a twelve step programme.

    (He has no control. He needs a twelve step programme.)

    I'm also addicted to the present tense, though I've been trying to train myself to work in the past. I was a bit disappointed this write up didn't touch on the connections between tense, POV and narration...but then again I guess the motto of the Scooposphere is "if you find an article wanting, write a better one."

    So I'll shut up now.

    Thanks.


    I'm from a small, unknown country in the north called Ca-na-da. We are a simple, grease-loving people who enjoy le weekend de ski.
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