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Common Plot Errors: Rebel Without a Cause

by janra
Posted to Craft, Plot on Sun Jul 18, 2004 at 07:56:34 PM PST
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In a story, everybody has a "cause" - something they want to get, to do, to find, to stop. Not all of these causes are relevant to the plot, but they are there nonetheless.

In the case of the protagonist and antagonist, one of the defining characteristics of their respective causes is that they are conflicting: for one to succeed, the other must fail. But when the antagonist has no reason beyond the dictates of the plot to oppose the protagonist, their conflict - and the story - weakens.


It has been said many times in articles, writing books, and workshops: a plot is only as strong as its antagonist. Knowing that, why do we see unexplained and even nonsensical actions from the antagonist? Nobody wakes up and thinks, "I think I'll do evil today."

The quick and superficial answer is that characterization is hard work. For many writers, it is the entire answer. Characterization is hard work, so they focus on the protagonist and let the rest slide, because they believe that the protagonist is the most important character in the story.

For other writers, there's the issue of discomfort. It's not a pleasant thing to realize that in a criminal's mind, his actions can be rationalized or justified. It's much more comfortable to shrug and assure ourselves that criminals are just bad people, who do bad things. It can be even more disconcerting to realize that if you were in the antagonist's position, you could realistically contemplate, or even do, the things a "bad person" does.

There is also the issue of empathy. Not every writer can write characters who act, think, and believe differently than they do, so figuring out reasonable and justifiable motivations for a character whose actions you abhor is a challenge.

But it's a challenge worth taking on. Antagonists who are evil for the sake of being evil don't lead to plausible conflicts, they lead to comic-book conflicts. This is perfectly acceptable if you're intending to write a superhero comic and "Mua-ha-ha-ha!" is an integral part of your supervillain's vocabulary, but is not usually acceptable in other genres.

(Don't get me wrong: I think superhero comics are great fun, but they're not the style of writing under discussion.)

It's very hard to get the reader to believe in an antagonist when that antagonist is pure, unadulterated evil. Everybody - protagonist, antagonist, sidekick, and all the other characters - have a motivation driving their actions in a story. "Because he's evil" or "because he wants to take over the world" just doesn't cut it.

Fixing this plot error is both easy and hard. Easy, because all you have to do is figure out your antagonist's motivation. Hard, because doing that is a lot of work.

In addition to the usual character profiling questions you can ask yourself, or ask your character in a mock interview, you could also try turning your entire story upside down. Reverse the characters' roles, tell the story from the antagonist's point of view. What does the antagonist want? How is the protagonist blocking him? What does the antagonist try, and how is he thwarted? I'm not advocating writing this reversed story in full, but brainstorming, outlining, and maybe writing out a few key scenes with the antagonist as hero.

Doing this may force you to re-think your plot - but the end result will be stronger for it.

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Common Plot Errors: Rebel Without a Cause | 8 comments (5 topical, 0 hidden)
Evil...Delicious Evil (4.00/2) (#4)
by CheeseburgerBrown on Wed Jul 28, 2004 at 03:35:41 AM PST
The thing about evil that folks sometimes fail to appreciate it that is must be seductive to be effective. That is to say that a villain will fail as a character if there is not some small part of the reader who, against their better judgement, empathises with the antagonist's warped perspective.

Even if one were writing about a mad beast of a villain, a black-hearted totality of villany -- we the audience should still be able to be jealous of the villain's unbridled freedom of action, or infinite self-indulgence, or merciless juggernaut power -- or some element that makes the villain attractive, even in a base, transient way.

Without deliciousness evil is just poor behaviour.

I'm from a small, unknown country in the north called Ca-na-da. We are a simple, grease-loving people who enjoy le weekend de ski.
Evil (4.00/1) (#7)
by Anonymous Writer on Tue Feb 22, 2005 at 04:50:24 AM PST
Your comments are excellent.  We all know when the hero is a well-rounded character, but often antagonists are so stereotyped - the villian is portrayed as totally evil.  Even Dar Vader started off as a nice guy.   As we all do have dark elements within ourselves, even villians can be gracious hosts or talk about fascinating topics.  

I'm going to try your suggestion, and will post back what I find, if it's of interest.

Excellent! (3.00/0) (#6)
by Roonblah on Fri Oct 08, 2004 at 10:15:30 AM PST
I agree with your points. Building a stronger antagonist does strengthen the story overall. I hope I'm not too odd, but I generally can find a way to empathise with an antagonist. We all have bad sides, even those of us who hide them, so it isn't too hard to take an emotion and twist it into something that justifies an action. I might not like the antagonist, but for better or worse, he or she will have a part of me within them. I'd like to make sure that part is complete.

Thanks for writing this. It's a good series.
"There will be an occasional happy, so that it might be crushed under the boot of the writer." Tim Minear

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Dr. Evil? (2.00/0) (#5)
by Anonymous Writer on Fri Sep 03, 2004 at 05:32:56 PM PST
Don't be dissing comic book villains.  Just because they laugh funny doesn't mean they're lacking for valid motivations or human emotion (even when they're not strictly human).  Conversely, if you are writing a superhero story you should NOT feel free to chuck character motivation into the dustbin.  In the modern era, readers expect shades of grey and moral ambiguity from heroes as well as villains.

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