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by janra
Posted to Diaries, Diary on Sun Jan 25, 2004 at 11:28:03 AM PST
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Just a little exercise I did today. It's a set of three writing prompts, each ten minutes long. I like to try to make all three into one semi-coherent story even though I don't know what the next prompt will be until I've finished writing for the previous one.

He stretched his neck and blinked blearily around. The green was endless, reaching far above his head so all he could see was the sky. The other turtles on the trek were lost, he told himself. Lost.

He pulled his head back and took a few more steps, pushing the tall grass out of his way. This land business was far more untidy than the water... bits of dry grass scratched his skin under the shell. Pulling his head in would be more than a little uncomfortable.

He thought he heard waves breaking on the beach to his left, and turned to follow the sound. He stretched his neck again, another futile attempt to see over the grass. Grass everywhere, all around. He should never have let them talk him into leaving the beach.

The sound he had heard stopped briefly, and the waving grass stopped moving. A sound he had thought universal was common! It hadn't been waves, but wind!

He pulled his head under his shell to think, and was faced with the unpleasant thought that both they and he were lost. Either that or they, in their youth, had forgotten their promise to return by a certain time.

But he was certainly lost.

The grass started waving again as he heard the wave sound start. He heaved his legs forward, and started the awkward process of turning around. Why had he listened to them...

They said they had explored the island before, and had even come back to the ocean with strange plants from beyond the beaches.

The grass behind him was flattened, the tips pointing directly toward him. Only one step forward, and he realized this wasn't going to work. The grass jabbed him about the neck.

He heard something sniff behind him, and pulled everything he could under his shell.

Something scraped his shell once, twice, three times. Hot breath washed over one of his legs and a whine of frustration came from above.

He narrowed his eyes, glaring at the tiny strip of ground he could see from inside his shell. They hadn't mentioned dangerous animals...

He was going to give those kids such a talking-to when they got back to the ocean!

If they got back...

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Questions... (3.00/0) (#1)
by Martooni on Mon Jan 26, 2004 at 12:38:43 PM PST
What are the prompts? I'm guessing that the first sentence might be one, but which ones are the others?

Looks like an entertaining exercise, though -- like a prosey extension of "Mad Libs".

Did you find this online or in a book? I wouldn't mind trying my hand at a few...

answers... (3.00/0) (#2)
by janra on Mon Jan 26, 2004 at 08:19:51 PM PST
The first sentence is not a prompt :-)

The first prompt was of the sort "use the following words in a story" followed by half a dozen totally unrelated words.

The prompts are not out of a book. I'm not sure where they come from, apart from out of ana's head...

A few people get together in #writing Sunday mornings at 10AM PST/1PM EST and do the prompts all together. Only sometimes I sleep through it.
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Who needs to be big and burly when you can just apply physics?
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ana's head (3.00/0) (#3)
by ana on Wed Jan 28, 2004 at 07:00:28 AM PST
They are original, for the most part.

I also post them on Toasted-cheese.com, in the forum section, under "Locusts and Tape", if you'd like to play along after the fact.
Exploring dark places since last Thursday
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