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From the mind to the paper...but most often not.

by Kimheb Electra
Posted to Craft, Ideas on Fri Mar 14, 2003 at 09:51:47 AM PST
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Ok. Here's my problem and I hope you can help nudge me in the right direction...

For many many years, during school and then later work, I never wanted to write but I would get these bright and inspirational flashes. Parts of stories. The beginning to a story, the end, scenes, and much more. Yet I never acted on them.

Since I have become "forcibly retired" from the I/T field to other "normal" jobs I have much more free time on my hands. I started a journal with fountain pen just before this happened and discovered that I enjoy writing very much. I've gone through about a journal a month just on my own ideas and thoughts. But oddly only for my own ideas and thoughts and experiences.

What has happened now though is that I can find no way to take the story ideas that appear full-blown in my mind and put them down on paper - or in this case iBook. ;-)

The situation is thus:

1) I get an idea.

2) This idea sparks a story in my head and before you know it I have a mental outline of the story from beginning to end. Just a general flow, no names or places or anything else.

3) Before I can put this flow down on paper, in fact most often AS I put the flow down on paper, it changes completely and I stop putting it down very early on because now-everything's-a-jumble-and-I-have-no-clear-path-and-have-even-lost-the-mental-outline.

See my problem. The story is gone before I even get a chance to write it down. I could probably, if I overcame some foot-in-mouth stumbling, tell this in storyteller format verbally. But that doesn't get it down on paper. (I'm not sure voice-recognition software would be able to keep up with me.)

I'd dearly love to get some of the mental stories down on paper but they all just seem to be fading mist when I reach for them. :-(

Kimheb
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    From the mind to the paper...but most often not. | 3 comments (3 topical, 0 hidden)
    I believe (none/0) (#1)
    by cachilders on Mon Mar 10, 2003 at 08:55:57 PM PST
    the story is not slipping, but you are attempting to grasp t too quickly. Stories are massive things, and writing them can be difficult if you are attempting a snapshot. If, however, you were to find a entrance to the story and follow the path that comes in slow paces, you would most likely find your ending and middle to be very much like your inspired vision. If you find your inspiration to be very complete, perhaps a loose outline would help, then you will be giving yourself a general guideline without attempting to spill the whole story in one sitting.
     
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    What I do (none/0) (#2)
    by rstark on Tue Aug 26, 2003 at 07:19:01 PM PST
    All of my ideas come to me when I'm about ten minutes from sleep; I'm usually in bed, in total darkness, and too tired and/or too damn lazy to seek out any way to put them down.  I've lost a lot of ideas that way.

    I invested in a tape recorder. They work phenomenally. You can get one cheap for about ten bucks, and they are completely worth it. When I'm writing, I need one with me at all times. I've got the worst memory that some climactic sentence or witty phrase will always slam the door on me about fifteen seconds after I've found it. My recorder's saved my butt more times than I can remember. Literally.

    Picture worth a thousand (none/0) (#3)
    by Enkeliina on Thu Dec 04, 2003 at 02:50:02 PM PST
    I've had this problem myself.  Only once did I get an absolute full story.  Miserably I was as far from a pen and paper as possible and I actually didn't want to write the story.  I didn't like it.  Don't ask me how I got it.
    However, one thing that did help for other half-baked imaginings, was drawing out the story.  Just quick sketches.  It gave me a bit of a story board.  After that things can be sorted out because it is on paper.  Try to make a mental movie in your head telling the story.  Visibly "see" the events occuring.
    There is this also, sometimes our minds think some fantastical things, because that's exactly what they are.  Fantastical.  Your logical side may be telling you to give up your ridiculous notions subconsciously.  Which is why I suggested using the creative side by drawing, to reinforce the ridiculous.  There could also be an error in logic in your story which you can't imagine because you're not thinking with that part of your brain when you're creating the story.  Therefore, if you can even get the points down, ie. beginning, middle, end, then you can look at it objectively and see if it even makes sense.  If it doesn't initially, give it a little time, go back look at it again and find the gems.
    Something I just thought of, you could be writing in the wrong style too.  You could be better at screen writing, short story/anthology, epic poetry, or who knows.  Experiment with a jack and jill story.  Something super basic.  Find out if you like one type over another.
    You mentioned a lack of interest in writing earlier on or in school.  Please don't take this badly :|  It sounds like you weren't really interested in writing in school and I'm thinking maybe you didn't pay attention to the lessons that do help.  Things like plot skeletons and construction.  Try taking a writing class/course or go to the library and read those writing manuals.  It's amazing the stuff we take for granted, like skin.  Half the time we don't even make a note of its existance, yet without it - *ouch*!
    Hopefully something I've written illuminates the dark recesses of your mind and boom! you'll be an author makin' money (a rare find).
    Words and Time my life's Obsessions.
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