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Character as Desire

by macrobat
Posted to Exercises, Characterisation on Fri Nov 30, 2001 at 04:10:06 AM PST
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Character isn't physical description. It isn't a resume. According to Aristotle, character is action, but an important corrolary to that is, character is desire.

I think we can all agree that it's important to know our characters thoroughly, if not by the time we start writing, then at least by the time we finish that all-important first draft. But it isn't sufficient to know a physical description, or go through someone's backstory to chronicle how they got to the point where the story begins in the first place. Although these things are important, we need to have more to work with. They give us the whos and wheres and whats of a story, but they lack the thing that will make the reader care (at least, if that reader is anything like me :) --why?

The "why" of a story has less to do with the character's dossier than his or her attitude towards it. E.g., you have character who is a policewoman. Did she always want to be a policewoman, or did she join the force because she wanted to follow in her father's footsteps? Or does she hate one particular kind of crime? If you look closely, you'll find that almost all of the "whys" of a story have to do with a character's wants, needs, or fears. So this exercise is a way of examining (or generating) a character through the lens of his/her desires. (Note: This exercise isn't original to me, but alas, I don't remember who first recommended it. I'm passing it on because it works for me.)

Here's the exercise: write, in at least twelve short sentences, twelve or more things about your character's wants, needs, hates, and fears (no-one said a desire can't be negative). One of them should be a secret.

Note that, as a desire for one thing often implies a hatred of its opposite, you'll be making subtle decisions about a character by how you phrase it. This also means you probably shouldn't write about a slave who both "hates slavery" and "loves freedom," because the one kinda implies the other. But taking a slave who hates slavery and saying that he wants to feel proud of his work is adding some extra depth.

Also, although you might not necessarily post all the details here, see if your character's desires don't also provide insight into their backstory, or provide a plot element that you otherwise wouldn't have thought of.

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How much do you know about your characters before writing?
  • I know just enough to get them into the situation I'm writing about 28%
  • I know a lot, but I learn even more by the time I'm done 48%
  • I know almost everything about them before writing 12%
  • I know everything before I even think up a story about them 0%
  • I know more about them than I can ever hope to write 12%

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    Character development (none/0) (#1)
    by ana on Sat Dec 01, 2001 at 09:42:58 AM PST
    It's certainly the case in my (limited) experience that, once you create a character, give her a name, and sketch out a situation, she's got a mind of her own. She then proceeds to do precisely what she pleases, whether it meshes with what the author had in mind or not. And even if those vignettes remain unpublished, they're still a part of the character's back story.

    So, on to the exercise, as assigned. Meet Jen. She's a middle-aged physics professor, teaching in a women's college somewhere in New England. She travels, somewhat seldom, to conferences, but opens her home to visiting colleages from other colleges; there are often technical bull sessions far into the night in her living room. She falls in love with most of her students, for a while, but carefully avoids actually dating them, for fear of what the community might think. She enjoys short, intense, relationships, if she's out of town; thinks that's where her love life is going. She's profoundly uncomfortable with would-be lovers who want serious relationships (having been burned by love too many times?). She has trouble understanding liberal artsy types like most of the folks at the college. All this led to a rather unexpected plot element: rather to the surprise of both parties (and the author!), she ends up in a lasting relationship with a poet who was once her student.

    Vignettes from the back story are burbling around in my mind; how did she come to these prejudices? What kinds of near-tragic emotional experiences did she have in grad school (everyone has them; what were hers)?

    Ana
    Exploring dark places since last Thursday

    Bass, ackwards, as usual. (none/0) (#2)
    by gordian knot on Thu Dec 06, 2001 at 01:13:04 PM PST
    I started exploring one of my characters (or tried to), using this method. I know a fair amount about what he does, but there's absolutely no emotional content to him yet. I wound up having to turn the exercise around, so to speak, by asking questions first. For instance, I know that he chooses to study 20th C. pop culture in college, and eventually goes on to make this the subject of his Doctoral thesis. (this is SF, set about 35 years from now) I have no idea whether there are any strong emotional reasons for his choice, so I have to ask questions that will probably create backstory as I answer them, as well as giving him some psychological substance.

    I've written very little fiction, and haven't actually finished anything yet, so I don't know if my approach is atypical, or whether the twelve questions are kind of a formulaic approach that simply isn't always appropriate. I started the exercise in good faith, but suddenly realized that it was impossible to make statements about hate, love, fear, etc., in connection with a character I don't even know yet.

    Any comments?

    asking questions of your characters... (none/0) (#3)
    by janra on Thu Dec 06, 2001 at 02:56:03 PM PST

    Actually, it's not a bad idea at all. One technique I've heard of is conducting an interview with them.

    Myself, some of the things I do:

    • write diary entries - all the things the character wants to say about the other characters but is too polite to actually say in the story. Also, if the character is very blunt and/or insensitive, what is the line they draw, if any?
    • put them in situations outside of the story, or have them meet characters outside of the story
    • do a tarot reading for the character (this works best when you already partly know them and are just looking for more detail)

    The tarot one is a lot of fun, and it can also give you ideas if you're stuck for where to take your character next, or how to solve a particular problem they're having.


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    Who needs to be big and burly when you can just apply physics?
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    Cool. (none/0) (#4)
    by ana on Fri Dec 07, 2001 at 09:47:42 AM PST
    I've done this myself, in a slightly different way. Once they'd created a relationship, the two characters spent a lot of time telling each other stories from their lives, before they became friends. So they developed their characters in a way that suited them. Some of that stuff got posted; some not.

    Ana
    Exploring dark places since last Thursday
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    Not incompatible with the original exercise (none/0) (#5)
    by macrobat on Fri Dec 07, 2001 at 10:00:20 AM PST
    Note that I said the dossier approach, while important, needed to be augmented. You can and should have some background information on your character already. But the aim of this exercise it to get more impact from that background. It can be free-form, or Q&A, or anything you like. The essential point is, your statement/question should deal with wants, needs, and fears, so focus your character interview on those and you should be able to get some good material from him.

    As to the "formulaic" question--bite your tongue! :)

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    Blush (none/0) (#6)
    by gordian knot on Fri Dec 07, 2001 at 01:07:05 PM PST
    Consider it bit.

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