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Truly awful writing takes talent
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by janra on Mon Jan 17, 2005 at 04:56:33 AM PST
That's an excellent point. It's not that they're long, because long sentences can work well. It's that they have so many unrelated - or if related, unneccessary - asides.
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Who needs to be big and burly when you can just apply physics?
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