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Common plot errors: deus ex machina | 9 comments (8 topical, 0 hidden)
Sorcerer's Apprentice (4.00/1) (#6)
by ana on Wed Apr 14, 2004 at 07:24:27 AM PST
So when the apprentice realizes he's loosed a von Neuman machine on the world, he takes an axe and chops all the brooms to bits. Nice, neat Deus ex Machina kind of an ending.

Except, well, the shards are still enchanted.

So, yeah, it could be fun, examining the mopping-up operations after, or the leakage around, a Deus ex Machina solution.
Exploring dark places since last Thursday
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Common plot errors: deus ex machina | 9 comments (8 topical, 0 hidden)
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