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Deep ponds, shallow oceans... | 4 comments (4 topical, 0 hidden)
A teeming mass of a world is best- (4.00/1) (#4)
by Quincer on Sat Apr 30, 2005 at 12:44:34 PM PST
Any amount of detail is good.  The author just has to know how to deal with it.

I don't like reading about how houses and animals in a certain village look, then being told, "And so Reltiolhnand threw mud at his friend DIelslseD's face as they had not a care in the world . . "  It's not personal.  I like the surroundings to interact with the main characters, see what it does and might make the observer think of.  

To create a world truly alive, treat it as alive.

Abnormally,
E. Quinn B.

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