The story builds up well. Throughout it the suspense is built and I'm just about ready to jump ahead.

In the beginning I'm a bit uncertain about what is going on.I kind of thought the kid was someone in passing. But as soon as you got around to talking about his eyes and stuff I begun to find the thread.

There was some parts in the middle where I felt lost again. The end is nigh part didn't quite catch my imagination.

I was expecting the main character to die in a flash of lightning or similar by the end. And was disappointed she wasn't.
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When in doubt,
turn around,
cry and shout

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